Example: Harry Potter

This sample critique reflects the kind of feedback our system provides — covering structure, prose, pacing, character arcs, and marketability.

Chapter 16 feels too fast—expand the trapdoor challenges for more impact.

Hogwarts and the magical world are vivid and immersive throughout.

Strong growth, but her shift after the troll scene could use more setup.

This manuscript strongly fits the MG fantasy genre and comp titles.